2005-08-18, 6:37 p.m.
not-to-be
First Impression: Oh god, I'm gonna hate this layout.
Username & Title: 3/5 pts eh, your username is alright I suppose...I don't know WHAT your supposed to not be, but whatever. Your title, meh, I suppose...
Layout/Navigation: 15/30 pts I hate it I hate it I hate it. Did I mention I hate it? At just a glance, it appears that your text is very hard to read for you entry. I don't like the cluster of pictures. BLECK. I hate it. Now your navigation, I hate it too. It should, in my opinion, not be in a scroll box. It's a pain because if someone wants to read all that stuff they shouldn't have to scroll to get to it right? Your arcives have a different layout. I like that layout. you should go back to that one. It's a lot more organized. Your titles are WAY TO LONG. They call it 'short description' for a reason.
Content: 40/45 pts the first entry I read was this one. There is genuine emotion put into the entry but the way it is expressed is too cliche. Hopefully the rest of your diary isn't this cliche. The next entry is MUCH better (read it here) but I still can't STAND your layout. story. Some of your entries are good. The ones talking of heartbreak, loss, and pain, but then you have others that start of with "You know what SP? You're a whore and I hate you." Your writing style isn't consistent. That bothers me, and you don't update much either. I especially like this, this, and this. In the last one, you finally denounced sounding pretty to please. Now I think I will really start to like your diary because you're not trying to please anyone but your need to write and vent. Over all, your writing was alright. You have many many spelling and grammar errors throughout your entires though. Maybe you should proof read your entries before you submit them.
Links: 5/5 pts Under extras and then reviews.
Extras: 5/5 pts Plenty. About, Bio, cast, 101 things, loves/hates, my view, quotes, tv/movie quotes, fanlistings, reviews, links and rings. nice.
Contact Info: 5/5 pts only notes and guestbook
Returnability: 5/5 pts sure, why not?
Bonus: 0/0 pts Naw, no bonus this time.
Total: 78/100 pts
Reviewer: Britta