2005-08-08, 3:24 p.m.
for-you-only
for-you-only: 5 /5 pts
Your username is pretty unique. It‘s not too over the top but it‘s not boring.
Layout: 20/30 pts
Hmm..this one is tough. I like the dark aspect of your layout,but I feel you put it way over the top. It’s too much. Too cluttered. What my suggestion for you, is to pick one of the four pictures you have on your layout and build around that one picture for your layout. Too mnay pictures or any other element of a layout makes it look cluttered and doesn’t appeal to the eyes. I also do not like these random gray boxes you have sitting around on your page. One, I believe, is the ‘short description’ or ‘title’ of your entry, and I don’t see why it’s not in the frame that has your entry. The title being on the side of the frame that it’s refering to could cause confusion as to what it means. One more thing, in my opinion, I think you should get rid of your site map and if you take my advice with focusing on one picture for your layout, just put up a navigation box. People don’t like to have to click a link to take them to a completely different page for your navigation. It seems pointless.
Content: 30/45 pts
Ok, Ms. RANDOM, the first entry I read was this one. Let me ask you one question. What the hell were you talking about? Ok, someone keeps telling you you’re lazy and what not, but WHO? Someone is accusing you of being a theif…WHO? In this first entry, it seems that you write just assuming that the people that read the entry will know what you’re talking about. Most of the time that’s not the case. If you want people to understand what you’re talking about, get more in depth, say whats bothering you instead of using phrases like ‘oh she said I was lazy…fuck me..." Alright, I'm not going to comment directly about the rest of the entries I read (from June 1st to Present). Your writing is iffy. In my opinion, it's not good, but it's not shit on the bottom of my shoe either. You seem like you try to hard to put emotion into your entries. Just be yourself, write so everyone can understand it, even over-explain things just in case, and don't be too hard on yourself!
Links: 5/5 pts
Yippy! You linked us! YAY! :D
Extras: 5/5 pts
You have ALOT of extras, but like I said before, you should organize them so they can be shown on your main page instead of having your navigation on a completely seperate page.
Contact Info: 5/5 pts
Notes, Guestbook, and Email. Not too bad. More than I have.
Will we come back?: 1/5 pts
I'm not trying to be a crazy bitch here, but I honestly don't see myself coming back to your site often if at all. Your layout is too cluttered, the font for your entries, I feel, is too large, your navigation drives me NUTS, and I don't understand alot of what you write about because you don't explain alot. Sorry babe.
Bonus: No pts
Sorry babe, no bonus this go round. Thanks for the chance to review your diary!